大学英语四级模拟试卷 第21组(写作)

Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic, “The Way to Success” based on the following outlines.
Your composition should be no less than 100 words.
1. 每个人都试图在事业上获得成功。
2. 意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋进取是成功的三大要素。
3. 我坚信……
Part Ⅴ 写作指导
 关于成功之路有很多说法,但考生必须紧扣题纲。第一段写每个人都试图在事业上获得成功,这是一个普遍的现象。该如何就这一点进行展开呢 ?考生在此不能长篇大论地举例说明,因为这是引言段,可以由第一句很自然地想到,并不是每个人都会成功,为什么呢?由这个问题可以引出文章的主旨,即成功者都不顾艰难困苦,坚持不懈直到最后成功,而失败者却常常半途而废。这句话也起了引出下文的作用。第二段,首先接着上文所说,自然地引出意志坚强,锲而不舍,勤奋进取是成功的三大要素。作为本段的主题句要论证这一观点,可
以用例证法,这里要注意语言简洁,例子要典型。第三段是由考生表明自己对成功之路的观点,实际上是对前文的一个结论。功夫不负有心人,成功属于那些坚持不懈,努力进取的人,最后点题,这就是成功之路。
Sample Writing
The Way to Success
 Everyone tries to achieve success in his career, but someone finally attains his aim while the other fails. Why? The successful one continues his cause to the
end through long period of hard work, but the failure one is easily disappointed and stops halfway.
 Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the cet4v.com success. A
man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks
to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Sun Zhongshan was such a man. Many
of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and at last he
succeeded. Diligence means steadiness in ones work and study. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no
one can achieve anything.
 I believe that where there is a will there is a way and that success belongs to whoever can put up with long years of patient toil and constant effort. This is the way to success

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